tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post4850133171752911575..comments2023-11-14T20:07:25.747-08:00Comments on Eric Beetner: Flash Fiction - Church ChallengeEric Beetnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12504563937840205835noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-55951182564019699032010-03-02T21:36:38.411-08:002010-03-02T21:36:38.411-08:00Nice. From the fuckin' mouths of babes...Nice. From the fuckin' mouths of babes...Jimmy Callawayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725548493403210066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-22468660573594692522010-03-02T10:36:03.541-08:002010-03-02T10:36:03.541-08:00A very fine piece -- the subtle honesty and fresh ...A very fine piece -- the subtle honesty and fresh voice was perfect -- good stuffAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-8203276602331485422010-03-02T07:54:15.009-08:002010-03-02T07:54:15.009-08:00Man, you paint a vivid picture.Man, you paint a vivid picture.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-45936104684644526992010-03-02T06:22:21.162-08:002010-03-02T06:22:21.162-08:00You really have a great tone in this story. I feel...You really have a great tone in this story. I feel like I'm standing in the pew behind.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-69135980956428284492010-03-02T04:10:27.306-08:002010-03-02T04:10:27.306-08:00Nicely done, a new twist on the challenge. It giv...Nicely done, a new twist on the challenge. It gives new meaning to practicing what you preacher, doesn't it.<br /><br />DottieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-42833522237534176982010-03-01T21:20:53.222-08:002010-03-01T21:20:53.222-08:00This is warm and wonderful, Eric. It's a real...This is warm and wonderful, Eric. It's a really charming slice of life. Well done.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-11247690021812862552010-03-01T17:55:32.239-08:002010-03-01T17:55:32.239-08:00Nice job with that challenge. Very evocative story...Nice job with that challenge. Very evocative story.Sheila Deethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13465615546936319164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-58096374305658038182010-03-01T15:28:22.946-08:002010-03-01T15:28:22.946-08:00I dig it, Beetner. Solid piece of story telling fr...I dig it, Beetner. Solid piece of story telling from a fantastic up and coming stylistAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827652636843928373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-76263129744675743052010-03-01T13:42:17.650-08:002010-03-01T13:42:17.650-08:00'A chip off the old block' springs to mind...'A chip off the old block' springs to mind.<br /><br />Far deeper than it appears at first sight. Far deeper.<br /><br />Excellent writing old bean<br /><br />4DDILLIGAFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16520650650468676361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-56241976358742944812010-03-01T13:11:19.624-08:002010-03-01T13:11:19.624-08:00Great storytelling Eric. That was superb writing....Great storytelling Eric. That was superb writing. Regards.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-1174235744146448062010-03-01T12:52:54.282-08:002010-03-01T12:52:54.282-08:00Very nice. Seems we all have a loss of faith come...Very nice. Seems we all have a loss of faith come into our lives at some point. Enjoyed this one immensely.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-66758531668363287972010-03-01T12:18:46.882-08:002010-03-01T12:18:46.882-08:00Nicely done, Eric! I felt like I was standing in ...Nicely done, Eric! I felt like I was standing in this kid's shoes.sandra seamanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09786095189231150008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-80050070559305751732010-03-01T12:10:23.258-08:002010-03-01T12:10:23.258-08:00Great job. In and out quick with a nice little mes...Great job. In and out quick with a nice little message, and a "crime" of a different kind. Well done.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10070278104646895235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-84235346584456300412010-03-01T11:15:46.042-08:002010-03-01T11:15:46.042-08:00Wonderful piece of writing.Wonderful piece of writing.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-9585874954794231932010-03-01T10:46:24.450-08:002010-03-01T10:46:24.450-08:00I've been right behind that dress many times.
...I've been right behind that dress many times.<br /><br />Cool stuff. Nice break from all the beaten priests in the challenge.Steve Weddlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03876211586767139613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8645942946275670442.post-79063605572793228392010-03-01T10:44:54.333-08:002010-03-01T10:44:54.333-08:00It's hard to make two points in a story so sho...It's hard to make two points in a story so short, but you pulled it off. With a wry grin at the end, to boot.<br /><br />Good one.Dana Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01350344882342624735noreply@blogger.com